Liberty

:)Haha you really are experimenting with a lot of different drawing styles. I personally like simpler visuals which draw the focus to the content and topic of the message/satire/joke. This one draws the viewer's focus to the faces of the subjects rather than what they're saying.

Just my thoughts :)sean10 months ago#1910reply

swb replied 10 months ago.

In reply to Anonymous, comment #1909:

Sex can be deceiving too.swb10 months ago#1912reply

In reply to sean, comment #1910:

8oI prefer the simpler visuals as well. It's amazing how much the drawing changes the joke.swb10 months ago#1913reply

i agree, i hate the joke like thisAnonymous10 months ago#1915reply

Commissioned comicsThat is a stroke of genius. ^.^ I think that they may be right with the art here, I fear. It needs to stay a bit simpler or the joke is lost. Doesn't have to be stick, but you should consider avoiding attention drawing colors unless it is deliberate and give a bit less detail (IMO, i'm just trying to be a critic). =PJosh10 months ago#1925reply

I agree with swb - attention shifts to the faces of the subjects rather than what they're saying. Some humour works better with simpler drawings. In the T-Rex comic after this one, on the other hand, the T-Rex's expression is a big part of why it's funny, so in that case the more complicated drawing is justified.Esn10 months ago#1932reply

The detail in a comic definitely changes how it reads. You could try telling the same joke all week with different meaning given to it just by the level of detail in different parts.

Like a baby joke, and first it's the baby that's detailed and the other people that are stick figures, then vice versa...

Garfield once did it with bolding in the speech...Adam10 months ago#1961reply

Umm... Guns harm people, actually that is all they do. Well handguns at least. I mean if you had put guns maybe you could have gotten away with the whole hunting argument... but you put handguns; something that specifically was invented to kill people. Yeah,... fail.Anonymous9 months ago#2064reply

Anonymous replied 8 months ago.

In reply to Anonymous, comment #2064:

Idiot. Guns are tools. I have used a handgun in self defense and hunting. I use it for enjoyment at the a gun range - how is that different from you smoking that marijuana I'm sure you love. You aren't against guns. Just close-minded in the fact that you don't like people who like guns. Inteliigence fail. Anonymous8 months ago#2155reply

Smoking: Harms you and you=people

Beer: See above

Handgun: Terrible for hunting and self defence is harmful to the offender

Gay marriage: Arguably (by many of those who oppose it) harmful to the soul

Anonymous6 months ago#2363reply